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Submission for :iconchildrensillustrator: May Theme :D

Im so pleased with this you dont even know!
I actually did a background :O OMG! ha!
Hopefully its moderately decent!

:iconnightsheep: wanted me to do another sheep :giggle:

Character and Art (c) to meee :D

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Ok to start, I am very familiar with parochena's works and her technique improves with each deviation I see. And speaking of technique, I want to start there since I only rated it 3 1/2 stars. The background is amazing. I love the design, just enough detail to be interesting. All the little lights in the windows are really eyecatching. Her character, of course, is adorable. The shading on him/her looks (to me, a non-painter lol) awesome. I only wish there had been more detail in the bridges and the water and maybe a bit more sharpness to the roof in the foreground. The gradation in the sky makes for a lovely dusk setting. Now as for originality, I know it was for a contest with this theme. I can't say I've never seen something similar, but I haven't seen a lot of it. The impact was enough for me to click on it in #Thumbshare, which is why i rated that so highly. The colors make it quite striking. I would have granted it that extra half star had there been the slightest bit more contrast, but that's not parochena's style :) .
Overall, I think she took an idea and ran (in an adorable direction) with it. I love her interpretation of the "On the Roof" theme.
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:iconewwiej:
omg thats too cute n__n love the colours :D and how you made the city n__n

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You wouldn't want to get eaten by this [link] would you!! n__n
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maby I should clone myself, and seel me on ebay...
see it's not that hard to make money :D!
I wish puddings could be clonable tho....
:iconparochena:
Aww Thank you so much! :giggle: I kinda drew loads and loads of buildings one behind another until it got some sort of shape ;P

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:icondanni-marie:
Oh the background is awesome! you did fantastic! The colors of it and all. ha ha the lamb is adorable! Although shouldn't the kite have the longer part on the bottom...if you know what I mean? Awesome job! I'm so proud of you! Nice going with taking the next step to improving! :heart:

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:iconparochena:
Ahh Thank you! It was so tiresome with all the windows haha!
SO MANY WINDOWS :lmao:

haha! i have no idea! I kind of just drew the kite as how i remember a kite, its probably wrong hahaha! Oh well.. it can be a "define laws of gravity" kite :D
Thank youuu! :hug:

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:iconprosaix:
The perspective looks overall a bit ... well for theriver it's great, but the buildings...

As for the rest, it's great as usual, softness everywhere, hope you win!

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:iconparochena:
haha! yeah i still need to fix backgrounds in general :giggle: Thank you so much for your opinion though! :hug:

Oooh and its not a contest ;P just a monthly theme thing.

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:iconsau-toh-sau:
love the sheep and all the warm colors ! :aww:

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:damphyr: :heart: ... heaven knows that far away
is where i'd like to be most days ..
:icondanni-marie:
Oh my, I bet! But the out come was worth all the work! :giggle:

The kite is fine really. I'm just giving you a hard time. :D But "define laws of gravity"...funny! LOL :giggle:

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:iconnightsheep:
The city reminds me of Paris. But I haven't seen this cute sheep there when I was there years ago. Maybe I will see him/her when I am in Sweden over a few weeks :D

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:iconewwiej:
awesome :D looks like loads of work xD

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You wouldn't want to get eaten by this [link] would you!! n__n
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maby I should clone myself, and seel me on ebay...
see it's not that hard to make money :D!
I wish puddings could be clonable tho....

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