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Artist's Comments Fisshhyyyy!  This one actually changed a little bit from my original concept.. I decided to place the fish in the middle and make it a little bigger instead. For a WIP compared to a final, please go here [link] Hope you like it! Art and Character (c) to me  Copyright © Paulette Arochena. Do not claim, use, distribute, reproduce or trace any work without my written consent. All Rights Reserved. Daily DeviationGiven 2009-06-29With The Jellies by =parochena (Featured by ^JunkbyJen) Comments
 beautiful!!!
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Is this a goldfish? Because it kinda looks like one  Such a cute face it has ^w^-- "I'd say the difference between pinups and pornography is the difference between shaving and cutting your throat." - Dean Yeagle   WOW, this is so stunning!! I love the rich colours! And there's so much optimism and warmth here - though it's a water scene, it's certainly not cold! Hehe. The goldfish makes me think of an oceanic variety of a phoenix  And the jellyfishies are radiant too! I love the golden light shining down on them and how they're moving towards it --  Where is her RhYthm, where is his RhYme, when he is not with her, all of the time  So very very cool!
I love the composition and colours, great job  -- “Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light. COMMISSIONS OPEN  Omg that's truly beautiful! I specially like the colours. Really really great. Congrats! ^^
 Wowww, it's gorgeous!
I love the soft colours and the beautiful composition. Great work :] -- J1Star|ratS1J  So pretty! The fish is adorable, and the colors and lighting are fantastic. Awesome job. :]
-- a porcelain doll, beautiful and breakable. <3  I really love how those jelly fish have been painted!
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I love that there is a brilliant light source from the top giving it a heavenly quality. The style is very nice as well, it looks like it could come out of a children story book.
The flow of the fishes fins are beautiful, along with the flow of the sea jellies tentacles. I really don't see anything you need to improve on, I like the piece as is!
Great Job!
It actually makes me feel calm when looking at it. Other viewers may feel different though
Moving on to Goldia, I would say that, like the jellyfish, you've done well to make the fins look fluent like they should be in the water, but one of her fins, the right one, looks like it should be brought down a tad more, though that's nothing major.
The major thing I think could be improved on is her scales. To me, they seem too...bold, or stand out more than they should compared to the rest of the piece - maybe make the lines that define each scale fade out more, or less apparent as they reach the lighter areas.
For example, [link] - see how the scales look less apparent as they reach the light?
That's the only thing I really see that should to be improved - just practise painting scales
I hope you found this helpful as much as I found it fun to write..
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